conversation | love haiku poem

midnight, fast food place
the din of conversation
watching your mouth move

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8 comments:

Michael V said...

very interesting and thought provoking short poems you have here. I'm used to the more longer, general forms so this was a fresh new read for me. :)

Michael V said...

p.s. i added you to technorati... maybe you can do the same for me ? :)

Jade said...

love this - esp. when this happens in real life.

scatterhaiku said...

glad you liked it, jade. :)

scatterhaiku said...

glad you found the poems interesting, michael. :) would be happy to add you to technorati. :) but wait, which one was your site again??

scatterhaiku said...

found your site, michael. :) added it to my technorati favorites (come to think of it, i've been meaning to do that to my linked blogs). also got a friend to stumble it. :)

Borut said...

A mouth-moving piece!?:) Whatever that means!:) ... A good one.

scatterhaiku said...

glad you liked it, borut. :)