i said I'd visit
but I didn't
only regret now
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16 comments:
aww
thanks for dropping by, alyssum. :)
always do what your promise = good integrity
true, true. :( thanks for the comment, zen...
This one was written a couple of hours ago:
Once I refused her!
Tonight, in dreams, I ask her,
old gipsy, for help!?
thanks for the verses, borut. :) yours?
I'm so scatterbrained!:)... I can only hope so!:) A long, spooky story behind it... But I'm going to write a fictitious tale around this one, using the dozen or so of other haiku I wrote today!:) Tommorow!?:)
scatterbrained? :P you wrote a dozen haiku today? cool, borut. :D
In my experience, an intense approach to writing haiku, sixty a day is my never to be reached again record, makes one sort of scatterbrained!:)
60 a day? good grief... that's a lot of haiku... :O what brought that about, borut?
I was a mere beginner, that's what!:) Things seem to have improved tough: now, at my worst, I'm at a dozen a day!
that's still quite a lot. :O i try to average 3 a day, one for each blog of mine. :)
Good! Far, quite far from a beginner, then!:) Only the beginner would covet the almost impossible 60 haiku per day!:)
goodness. 60's just too much, it seems. :)
From that series of 60, or let’s say 50, only one found its way into a tiny collection of mine published in 2005 in Slovenian:
In sandy shadows
The petals of the flower
Of this worl fall off.
V peščenih sencah
se osipa na potki
cvet tega sveta
so then writing the 60 worked out well after all. :)
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